Teh Wozzinator

Edits in bold. There's rain on my window pain, Pane and I'm crying, Yea This is just me being picky, but 'Yea' is pronounced 'Yay', and is an old word. ...

Can't post a complicated review right now, but I also don't think it needs one. I love it. Especially the ending. It's probably one of the best breakup (it is ...

I don't have time to write every day. Actually, I've gotten into writing music more, but when I did write stories I had a notebook that was plain red. Seemed ...

Okay, I'm not even going to attempt to correct all the punctuation and grammar mistakes. It's easy enough to do that yourself if you actually want to. Not trying to ...

Edits in bold. ----------------------------------------- I threw my friends lives away so that I would be safe. I think that this sentence isn't the best to begin with, because is seems ...

I've read all the comments, and unfortunately, I going to have a slightly more harsh review. (Don't worry, I still liked it!) My edits in bold. I loved you. I ...

Okay, the review has been taken over for me, mostly by Aet. I would listen to what has been said so far, and you'll get nearly everything that I wanted ...

Okay, we'll try this one. Edits in bold. Battling Plane (2) This is my second attempt at this poem... Edited (original was quoted by the post below =) [ I ...

:D I loved it, to start with. I'm not going to quote-edit it, because there aren't enough edits to make. A few little things: In stanza six, your rhythm wasn't ...

Welcome to the site! You haven't, I believe, reviewed anything yet, but you should review two stories/poems (etc.) before posting any of your own work. Also, for every story/poem you ...

My review was just taken by Sapphire. Although I don't agree with all her edits (no offense meant, just a few with different preference of wording), she took care of ...

The Mutts pieces don't have to be read in order. They're written in random order out of a list of 100 one-word prompts in a challenge found on LiveJournal (PM ...

Dear Mr. Publisher, I hope my plea isn’t in vain. Please find enclosed a manuscript, Maybe "You'll find enclosed..."?? written in blue crayon. Vain and crayon don't rhyme. You see, ...

:D Hey Gryph, guess who's back. (This one was slightly rougher, however, so I will have some edits. [ In bold, of course ]) For new readers: You don't have ...

Edits in bold. The northern sky was a dull , uninteresting gray all the way to the horizon, where low banks of swirling clouds collected around the distant mountain peaks. ...